User blog:Deathfire2001/Machinima Sins Episode 23

'''Alright, the prologue for FOY, let's get on with it. It's only a minute long, so it can't be that bad right?'''

1. 0:03, actually good question, are you actively hunting Death Trappers now, is it some sort of sport or what.

2. 0:06, everyone does, unless the dragon balls are involved, in which case death is literally pointless.

3. 0:09, didn't you kill him last series

4. and if you didn't, nice way to tell us he's incredibly incompetent.

5. 0:17, not even trying to save your fried, all you can utter is the words no.

6. 0:20, how did you survive this attack?

7. 0:24, "Should've thought sooner?" what tf does this mean.

8. 0:37, screen transition

9. 0:48, you've never demonstrated this ability before, you could've used it during ROY episode 11.

10. Also, this laugh is terrible

11. 0:53, oh no another god awful intro

12. 1:12, get ready for Pink to only do one thing of substance this series.

13. 1:26, I don't even know if Lance even appears in this series.

14. 1:42, hario doesn't appear until EP 7 but okay.

15. I love how all of these areas are being shown, but none of them ever appear.

Final Sin Count: 15

Wait, wait, wait, you didn't think I'd sin the screen flickers did you.

Extra Sin Counter (Screen Flickers): 0:01, 0:03, 0:04, 0:06, 0:07, 0:08, 0:09

Final Sin Count: 22

Sentence: I guess this is it.

Biggest Chad: Death Mantis, he killed Magduo

Biggest Loser: Shadowwarrior454. He got killed after a year of running.