User blog:Deathfire2001/Machinima Sins Episode 21

'''Alright, the best episode in ROY, hopefully it's as good as a I remember, but, I don't have high hopes. This should be the first episode that doesn't have 60 sins, but who knows.'''

1. Oh hey, episode without the intro, already looking better. Anyways, 0:01, how can you sense him without any ability to do so prior.

2. 0:04, why no sneak attack?

3. 0:08. THis white screen

4. 0:14, completely uneccessary, as they just powered down.

5. 0:17, oh shit the terrible intro's back.

6. 0:34, something's gonna happen, because your right next to the fucking castle.

7. 0:52, how tf have you not been revealed yet?

8. 0:54, this seems saturated and unnecessary, you can just reveal who it is.

9. Also, for this entire scene, the smoke doesn't cover the full screen.

10. 1:02, I'm gonna assume that this is axitonium, but what are you doing flying away!

11. 1:05, Who are you?

12. 1:10, the beam sticks out.

13-15. 1:13, I can't tell who these two of these three are, but why are none of you doing anything.

16. 1:15, your allies are getting mawled, and this is your goal in life?

17. 1:17, karma

18. 1:21, yes I am sinning this sound effect, I've heard it too many times.

19. 1:25, he's standing on you do something.

20. Also, this is an incredibly ineffecient strategy

21. 1:32, you have more then enough time to dodge this attack, they move in slow motion.

22. 1:35, ah yes, we beat one opponent, now to ignore the rest.

23. 1:40, this color

24. Fawn, why are you doing absolutely nothing.

25. 1:43, Schm, this is why I say Jacob was the only competent member of your group.

26. 1:46, the correct sentence is "I will die" not I have to die, unless your in Dragon Ball and are a saiyan in which case, free zenkai boost for you.

27. 1:46, also, you have literally no injuries on you, you got hit twice in this fight, what are you paper mache?

28. 1:49, ah yes, unable to accept the griping fact of reality, that you though everything would be a cakewalk, really this is just an emotional scene without any weight because Schm's been useless for the entire series.

29. 1:52, this sounds like Schm and Simon had some kind of relationship, and would've worked better had either character had any development throughout the series. Also, why do you revive the next series if you wanted to die here?

30. 2:01, you have more then enough time to react here

31. 2:02, damn, getting one hit, sucks to be you

32. 2:04, this greenscreen

33. 2:06, you have more then enough time to react

34. 2:07, how have you not died?

35. 2:08, Schm, you realize, when you've said that, he's had more then enough time to kill Coolboy right?

36. 2:14, Ah, yes, Darkwizard stood still for 6 seconds and awaited attack

37. Also, Schm, it took you 10 EPISODES, to do anything remotely interesting, and you needed to power up in order to do so.

38. 2:25, COWARDS

39. You do realize, that if you leave, and they lose, your very likely to die soon right.

40. 2:30, half of you to did literally nothing.

41. Also, when was this ability established, you know, very useful when Simon was about to die

42. 2:37, you have control over every dimension, use that?

43. 2:42, more people falling out of the sky.

44. 2:47, Black = Death Trapper

45. 2:50, you could've helped btw

46. 2:52, why didn't you get him earlier?

47. 2:56, what, your the only competent person on the team.

48. 2:59, he used it like, 5 episodes ago.

49. 3:01, literal plot convenience right here.

50. Not even a motivational speech, Lugiaboy's like, yep just do it, and then Jacob goes, I'm gonna be like nike and do it.

51. 3:08, what is the point

52. 3:12, ah yes, Jacob's powers are the opposite of super saiyan

53. Also, couldn't you discern that from the front?

54. Also, you're telling me, that Jacob can get even more stupid broken, this is just so much plot convenience.

55. 3:18, why tf didn't you do this sooner.

56. 3:22, no duh.

57. Also, why aren't you tping the 4th dimension group.

58. 3:33, this is the dumbest idea in history.

59. The butterflies

60. 3:45, we? Only you

61. 3:49, ah yes, restating your incompetence, nice

62. 3:57, like 10 people could barely beat Simon's Shadow and 2 Death Trappers, there's like 5 elite's and probably more death trappers, and your taking TWO people?!

63. Also, Lucariokiddo, Fawn, and Schm doing nothing, like always.

64. 4:18, not even referring to them as allies, just helpers, not even on your level are they?

65. Also, you could probably solo both in like five seconds, why aren't you helping.

66. 4:22, wait, you two are just gonna let him pass?

67. 4:30, ineffective, as Hasto, takes advantage literally right after.

68. 4:33, why not attack the Death Trapper?

69. 4:58, plot convenience

70. 5:02, how?

71. 5:12, DT 10, why are you agreeing with him?

72. 5:17, stop Starman?

73. 5:21, you had more then enough time to react here.

74. 5:25, this greenscreen's atroctius, makes Shadowwarrior look like a ghost.

75. 5:31, plot convenience

76. 5:46, or you know, help starman?

77. 5:50, also, how has the final battle not started, or is everyone twiddling their thumbs

78. Also, probably not if only three of them went to help.

79. 5:53, how are you not questioning him?

80. Also, how do you know this

81. And get off your ass and help the main protagonist

82. 6:16, why not take anyone else with you?

83. 6:23, or you know, Schm, because you one shot simon's shadow? You know, probably a good decision.

84. 6:27, so you let your allies get captured, and rekt, while you did nothing?

85. 6:31, where is the martian king when the door opens?

86. 6:36, ghost jacob

87. 6:47, the sin is for Jacob for asking the question

88. 6:50, true

89. 6:53, even you guys, but all your team does is suck your dick

90. 6:55, failing to open a door

91. 6:59, also, pointing out that Matt one shot the Martian King

92. Actually, now that I realize it, why didn't you help Mario and hasto?

93. 7:09, ah yes, clearly room for more people to show up.

94. 7:11, it should've been obvious

95. 7:19, Martian King, how'd you get here so fast?

96. 7:25, conveniently leaving space for another character to join.

97. 7:37, more people falling out of the sky, wait, the roof? Lennard was born from roof.

98. 7:40, doesn't that give you an unfair advantage, who tf would agree to that

99. Also, are you all gonna move yourselves to the void and be allies, I guess, this is a war stop.

100. 7:47, you have enough time to react.

101. 7:54, move faster?

102. 8:09, what are you all doing

103. 8:10, Nice view up clawdeender's butt.

104. 8:11, how did yo both go sideways.

105. 8:17, you were outnumbered, and you didn't even help them.

106. 8:20, actually that's just a cliche that is enforced because happy endings need to happen, and isn't always true. There's an FBI most wanted for a reason.

107. 8:23, could've used that earlier, or you know, when you were about to get C&B torture.

108. 8:30, beating one guy caused the fog to dissipate, so whenever someone dies, fog goes away.

109. 8:37, not like any of you helped

110. 8:40, actually it was like, 5 people, stop giving Jacob all the credit.

111. 8:43, you should assume that he already got his ass kicked.

112. 8:53, plot convenience

113. Also, why are you crawling then?

114. 9:01, prepare for Zaid to never appear in this series. Final Sin Count: 114

Sentence: Jacob is nike

Biggest Chad: Simon's Shadow, for being the first antagonist to kill any protagonists

Biggest Loser: Axitonium, for being the first person to die who wasn't revived.